Author's note: I just felt as if it would be fun to write a poem about how it goes back and forth between good and evil. Hopefully I did this correctly!
One is good
One is bad
Being happy is the way to go
The root of evil is down below
He comforts you with a gentle touch
And his counter-part will squeeze with a strong clutch
Arms opened wide, ready to spread jeer
As the one down below makes you shed a tear
You look up, and you know he’s there
Down below is the place people cannot bare
The hands of this man are soft and nice
One swipe with his claw, and boom you’ve been sliced
You pray and pray hoping to make everything better as it
should be
But I’m afraid to talk as he might kill me
Now you wonder how these two men draw different attractions
As Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde have many different actions
Wow John, I'm genuinely impressed! I could never rhyme so perfectly like that. You got your point across very clearly, this is awesome! My only suggestion is to maybe keep the good and evil tied in all the way to the end, just to clarify who is evil and who is good would work:) Awesome job though!
ReplyDeleteTheres my boy Juicy J...This is going to be your first big hit!! I can see you rapping this for sure! Of course your going to be good at rhyming poems cause all you do is rap, rap and rap.
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